February 2009

S M T W T F S
1234567
891011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728

Links

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Monday, December 22nd, 2008 05:06 pm

Title: I Can't
Author: cplberen
Fandom: SG1
Pairing: J/D
Spoilers: None
Rating: R
Word Count: 128
Disclaimer:  Stargate's not mine, yadda yadda
Summary:  It's too much.

 

I Can’t

By cplberen

 

 

I… I…

 

It’s too much. I can’t. 

 

It’s…

 

“Let go, Daniel.”

 

I… I’m going to die. It’s just not possible that a human body can feel this much and not die. It’s as if…

 

“Stop thinking. Let go.”

 

This is just… This is…

 

“Look at me.”

 

Heat and pressure.  And him. Surrounding.  Invading. 

 

Relentless. Driving into me, driving me to…

 

“Daniel, look at me.”

 

I can’t…

 

“Open your eyes.”

 

I…

 

Everything stops. So much pressure. 

 

A drop of sweat, so hot, hits my collarbone. 

 

“Daniel. Open your eyes.”

 

My eyelids lift and dark eyes swim into focus. So much warmth. So much heat.

 

“Let go. I’ve got you.” Absolute confidence.

 

One more stroke and I come apart. My vision whites out, but his eyes…

 

I’m not afraid.

 

“Jack.”

 

Tags:
Tuesday, December 23rd, 2008 11:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks! It's nice to hear that I got my... um... point across. :)